Task 1: The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Task 1: The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation

 in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The
given
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bar chart illustrates the
ratio
of accommodation which were rented and owned house in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Overall
the percentages of rental housing steadily decreased throughout the period,
whereas
inclined for being a land-lord. In 1918, the
ratio
of rental housing was below 80%, before fell slightly to around 70% in 1939 and 1953.
Then
this
ratio
gradually dropped to just over 30% in 1991 and 2001, before
rosing
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noticiably
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noticeably
noticeable
to nearly 35% in 2011. The remaining population which was
accommadated
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accommodated
in their own property was just under 80% in 1918, before receding to below 70%in 1939 and 1953. Until 2001, the
ratio
fell steadily to around 30% levels in 1991 and 2001 before inclining nearly 35% of the residents in England and Wales. 1971 was the year of rented and owned properties were at the same level of 50%,
then
the domination of
property owning
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can be observed.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ratio with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • households
  • accommodation
  • owned
  • rented
  • prevalent
  • transition period
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • analyze
  • summarize
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