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ar chart illustrates the different forms of gross domestic product (IT and Service industry) in the united kingdom from 1992 to 2000. These values are calculated in percentages

ar chart illustrates the different forms of gross domestic product (IT and Service industry) in the united kingdom from 1992 to 2000. These values are calculated in percentages
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The above chart illustrates the different forms of gross domestic product (GDP) ( IT and
Service
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industry
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) in the United Kingdom from 1992 to 2000. These values are calculated in Percentages. In 1992, the IT
industry
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 was more than 6% which increased by 8 in 1994. In the 1992
service
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industry
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 was 4 which jumped to 7 by 1994. In 1996, the IT
industry
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 was nearly 8 which increased by 12 in 1998. In 1996 it was around 7 which increased a little by 1998. In the 2000, the IT
industry
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 was highest with around 15. In the
Service
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industry
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 was more than 8. The great development took place from 1992 to 2000 in both
service
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 and IT.
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, from 1992 to 2000 the IT
industry
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as well as
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 the
service
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industry
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 increased. The above information describes the given chart which shows the GDP stands for gross domestic product.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words service, industry with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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