Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email, recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you both learn this sport together

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you well. How is your IELTS preparation going on? I have already registered for my IELTS exam on 9th September. Wish me luck! I am glad you asked for my advice for learning table
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. Well do you remember in our English speaking class how you expressed your eagerness to learn table
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since childhood but
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lack of a good institute and trainer near your home, you couldn't learn. I know it was not just for the cue card speaking session but you actually mean it, as your maternal grandfather was a famous
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player in his district. Guess what, your wait is over! Recently my sister handed me a leaflet of a new institute two blocks away from your home where students of any age are taught table
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. And they will provide a certificate after the course completion when you pass their level test. You know my hobby is to collect certificates by learning new things so we will join together and have fun learning. I will be your practice partner if you want. I have scanned and attached the soft copy of the leaflet for your betterment. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. With lots of love, Ava
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advice
  • recommend
  • suitable
  • learn
  • coach
  • lessons
  • tutorial videos
  • practice
  • tennis club
  • group
  • schedule
  • regularly
  • participants
  • tournaments
  • friendly matches
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