There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear

sir

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Sir

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madam

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Madam

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, Hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing to inform you about some unfavourable circumstances I am facing from a

bus

service near Uttara, sector 11. Every morning from Sunday to Thursday, I get my University classes from 8am and your

bus

service is the fastest and lowest cost transportation near my location, considering myself as a student. In the past, the

bus

used to arrive on time but lately, it has arrived

late

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than usual. For which I have missed a few of my morning classes. Highlighting an incident that happened recently,

that is

following

this

whole week during morning time when I tried to stop by waving at it, it went passed me unnoticed. I don't know why they are behaving so rudely. I even tried looking up on your website where no new updates regarding

this

delay were published. I am

also

concerned about the hygiene of the

bus

. As it is now more unclean and smelly to bear.

To sum up

, I am very much concerned about

this

bus

services, I am getting recently. Please I honestly request you to investigate properly and take action as soon as possible. Your positive solution will be very favourable for me. Sincerely yours Ava

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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6 paragraphs

210 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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adhering to schedules
inconvenience
daily routine
punctuality
frequency during peak hours
overcrowding
commuters
update system
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maintenance
breakdowns
irregular bus timings
passengers
delays
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