The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the important reasons for farmland
become
less productive and the table represents how these causes affected three regions during the 1990s.
Wrong verb form
becoming
Overall
, in the 1990s, the cause of over-grazing had the maximum
percentage of Correct word choice
highest
land
degradation
in the world. Apart from
this
, Europe country had the highest proportion of land
degradation
, while
North America had the lowest share.
To begin
with, almost one-third of land
destruction
was made
by over-grazing. Verb problem
caused
Moreover
, deforestation and over-cultivation had 30% and 28% degradation
respectively. The remaining 7% of destruction
was made by others.
Furthermore
, Europe was the nation who
Correct pronoun usage
that
make
the highest 9.8% deforestation and the total Wrong verb form
made
land
degraded by 23%. Whereas
, Oceania had 11.3% in over-grazing, which was contribute
Change the verb form
contributed
13
% Change preposition
to 13
in
total Change preposition
of
land
destruction
. Meanwhile, North America made 3.3% land
Change preposition
of land
degradation
in over-cultivation, so this
country was contribute
only 5% Change the verb form
contributed
in
the total Change preposition
to
destruction
of land
which was the lowest proportion.Submitted by saharshpatel2112 on
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