The chart below shows the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in household's in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information in about 150 words

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a statistical

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representation of the variability in

demand

of

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different electrical appliances and the amount of time spent doing housework in

household

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the household

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sector between 1920-2019

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we can clearly observe the rapid increase in

demand

of

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vacuum cleaner which was only used by 30% of households in 1920 but the late realisation of

advantages

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the advantages

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of vacuum cleaner made

it’s

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demand

reach

upto

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up to

100%. The washing machine had a moderate nature as

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its

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demand

slowly stretched. In 1920 the

demand

was 40% which slowly

rise

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rose

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upto

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up to

75%. The major difference we can notice is of

refrigerator

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refrigerators

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whose

demand

enlarged

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increased

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as in 1920 the

demand

was only 5% but

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its

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necessity

grow

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grew

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upto

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up to

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100% in 1980 itself which is still maintained in 2019

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also

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we can clearly observe the decline in hours of housework per week. As the technology made life easier than before which made the workload decline from 1920 to 2019. In 1920 people

use

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used

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to work 50 hours per week which reduced to 10 hours per week in 2019