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The plans below shows the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information in about 150 words

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The diagram illustrates how the Southwest
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airport
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Airport
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 looks now and
how
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what
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 it would be like after the reconstruction a year later.
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, the southwest
airport
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 will be expanded and it will offer far more facilities and better accessibility for passengers after the development work is done. To inaugurate with, the
airport
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 now has a single arrival and departure
area
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. The departure
area
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 is on the left of the building and has a cafe,
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 the arrival
area
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 does not have
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 amenities. Straight ahead of the arrival
area
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, customs and passport control could be seen.
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, passport control and security are located for departing passengers. The
airport
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 now has eight gates , two
walkway
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walkways
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 and
check-in-areas
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check-in areas
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. After the development work, which is expected to be done next year, the
airport
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 will have eighteen gates and a sky train inside the
airport
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. New shops will have access to bag drop facilities.
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, it will build where the
check in
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 point is now. The renovated
airport
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 will have more departure and entry points. It will
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 have ATMs and cafes for passengers in the arrival
area
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.
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Finally
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 a car higher facility would
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 be seen on the right side of the arrival hall.
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