Machine- made products have now replaced many hand- made products. Do you think the merits of this development outweigh its demerits? Why?
Answer text
Technology
nowadays has a great impact on our lives and the Use synonyms
products
we have been using Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
on
daily
basis. It has been argued Correct article usage
a daily
if
the advantages of Correct word choice
that
technology
Use synonyms
surpasses
Change the verb form
surpass
it's
disadvantages to Correct your spelling
their
human kind
. I believe that with the new generation we have now, Correct your spelling
humankind
technology
shall have more benefits than Use synonyms
it's
Correct your spelling
its
downside
especially Fix the agreement mistake
downsides
applied
to every Rephrase
when applied
Use synonyms
products
used.
Change to a singular noun
product
To begin
with, when buying Linking Words
products
, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
people
preferences for quality Change noun form
people's
matters
the most. As with the new Correct subject-verb agreement
matter
technology
Use synonyms
is
in the market, many machine-made Unnecessary verb
apply
products
were introduced and Use synonyms
was
greatly utilized mostly since it is more convenient and efficient. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
For example
, most fast foods are machine-made. They are easy to cook and affordable too. Most Linking Words
people
choose Use synonyms
these kind
of foods to save time and energy Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
instead
of cooking Linking Words
Use synonyms
home made
foods after work.
On ,the other hand, hand-made Correct your spelling
homemade
products
Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
Use synonyms
home cooked
meals are still the healthiest way to eat. Nothing beats eating at Add a hyphen
home-cooked
home
Use synonyms
at
your own comfort. Change preposition
in
Furthermore
, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
also
offers a great bond and time for Linking Words
family
to share meals together and Correct article usage
the family
maintaining
harmony in the house. Wrong verb form
maintain
For example
, Linking Words
instead
of eating at Linking Words
expensive
restaurant ,family can have a simple dinner at Add an article
an expensive
home
where everyone can participate in preparing the meal and Use synonyms
enjoying
at their own family table privately.
Wrong verb form
enjoy it
To sum up
, I believe that Linking Words
technology
helps us a lot to make our life easier and everything is possible and feasible with Use synonyms
technology
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the facts how Linking Words
technology
is an ally to us,Use synonyms
,
it should be utilized properly. Change the punctuation
apply
Technology
is for the Use synonyms
people
and Use synonyms
people
should be the Use synonyms
one
controlling and handling it not the other way around. Correct pronoun usage
ones
Technology
Use synonyms
offer
a bunch of benefits as long as we humans know how to handle it appropriatelyChange the verb form
offers
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