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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart demonstrates
export
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earnings
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 from five different types of
products
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 in a specific country in the time span of 2015 and 2016 in billion dollars.There is
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 a table which gives information regarding those five categories as rate-changing numbers with respect to the given time periods. As an overview, the most significant feature of
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 given information is that textiles experienced the highest increase in
export
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earnings
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 among other
products
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.
On the other hand
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, the only
products
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 which showed a decrease in
export
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earnings
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 from 2015 to 2016 the gems and jewellery. As it can be observed, the highest growth rate belongs to textiles with a 15.24% increase in
export
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earnings
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.
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 growth leads to a gain of approximately 32 billion dollars of
export
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 income from
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 product for
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 city.
Conversely
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, other product figures like Petroleum
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 and agricultural
products
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 show a negligible increase in
export
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 revenue for both of them with 3% and 0.81% respectively.
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, engineered goods as an
export
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 product had become much more popular in the given duration with 8.5% growth in the percentage.
In contrast
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 gems and jewellery lost nearly 5% of its income from 2015 to 2016.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, earnings, products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • economic sector
  • percentage change
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • trend analysis
  • year-on-year comparison
  • significant growth/decline
  • stagnation
  • market dynamics
  • fiscal repercussions
  • trade balance
  • competitive advantage
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