The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant
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The two bar graphs illustrate information about the
number
of postgraduates and graduate
students
who opted for their career pathways in the UK
in 2008.
Overall
, the highest number
of both graduate
and undergraduate students
have chosen further
studies, whereas
the least number
of them opted for voluntary work
. Furthermore
, undergraduates and graduates
have shown nearly the same figures for part-time work
and unemployment.
Turning to the destination of the UK
graduates
, approximately 30,000 graduates
obtained their higher studies. Nearly 18,000 graduate
students
got permanent jobs, whereas
, in contrast
, about 16,000 graduates
did not have any jobs. Moreover
, only 3500 graduate
students
have chosen voluntary work
.
Regarding postgraduate students
in the UK
, as is seen in the given graph, nearly 3000 of them have done further
studies. However
, approximately the same number
of postgraduate students
obtained full-time job opportunities. Furthermore
,1625 postgraduate students
did not have any kind of career in 2008. But 345 students
work
as volunteers. Conversely
, it is witnessed that selecting voluntary work
was not popular among postgraduate and undergraduate students
in the UK
in 2008.Submitted by nadee.document on
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