The illustration presents the production of hydro-electricity.

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The illustration presents the production of hydro-electricity. We can see from
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diagram the structure of
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dam
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the dam
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. The production hydro-electricity
have
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tight knit
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connections with
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a reservoir
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,intake,penstock,turbine,generator and
finally
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long distance power lines. The main goal is to stabilize water pressure with
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wall,that
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a special intake. From
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intake
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water arrives into the penstock
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after that water flow will achieve turbine.
Turbine
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carry out circulation,thereby generating electricity by generator.
Generator
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link with power lines that have long
distance
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,with
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construction
dam
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produce electricity for people. Interaction between
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points
are
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vital. If the
dam
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will
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damaged or destroyed,it represents hazards.
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difficulty
engineering
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construction essential for
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the production of hydro-electricity
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from planning
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project.
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Dam
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should be built capacity
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to safety,despite that have enormous size.By the
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dams have high quality of safety.
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