The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar
chart
compares the rate of ownig
and Correct your spelling
owning
rentig
Correct your spelling
renting
family
in England Fix the agreement mistake
families
an
Wales between 1918 and 2011.The data Correct your spelling
and
measured
by percentage.
Add a missing verb
is measured
Overall
,it can be noted that the bar chart
indicates that there was a dramatic decreased
in Replace the word
decrease
the
rented housing.Correct article usage
apply
Also
, in owned accommodation
there was a sharply decreased.
Looking in more detail,the bar Add a comma
,accommodation
chart
illustrates that the proportion of households in rented arrangements started by approximately 79% in 1918.Whereas
in 1939 and 1953 the number of families remained steady.From 1981 to 2001 , the ratio of rented arrangements was
dropped slightly, Unnecessary verb
apply
then
it started to rose
up in 2011.
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rise
Then
in 1918
there was a dramatic Add a comma
,1918
decreased
in the figure The Replace the word
decrease
chart
shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 about 69%.After that , in
1981 to 2001 , the ratio of rented housing Change preposition
from
was
dropped slightly, Unnecessary verb
apply
then
again it started to Correct word choice
and then
rose
Wrong verb form
rise
up
in 2011.
Rephrase
apply
However
, between 1991 and 2001 the rate of owned housing remaind
stabilize Correct your spelling
remained
remains
remind
about
20%.Change preposition
at about
Then
it goes
down again in 2011 Wrong verb form
went
about
65%.
One notable point is both rented and housing Change preposition
at about
were
a Change the verb form
was
staibilize
of the number in housing in 1939,1953 and 1991.Correct your spelling
stabilize
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