the graph shows the proportion of population age 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries USA, Japan and Sweden .

the graph shows the proportion of population age 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries USA, Japan and Sweden .
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The line chart illustrates the growth of the elderly
population
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in Japan, Sweden and the USA from 1940 to the present, with projections to 2040. As an
overall
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trend, the numbers have only grown over the
years
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and will continue to
rise
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in the future in all three countries. Less than 1 in 10 people in the United States were inhabited by the older
population
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in the 40s, a figure that has only continued to
rise
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, peaking at 15% in the 1980s. Since
then
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, the country has seen a slight falling fad till the 2020s. It is predicted to
rise
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again in the coming future, to up to a quarter of the total
population
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. Sweden
on the other hand
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has always seen an increasing trend, starting from 7% in the 40s to about 20% in 2015.
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country too, is forecast to experience a
rise
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in the numbers by the year 2040. Japan is slightly peculiar to analyse.
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with the other nations, senior citizens have decreased from 1940 (5%), reaching an all-time low near the 90s (3%), from which point it slowly started to pick up the pace, reaching 10% in the present
years
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. It is predicted to sharply
rise
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to about a fourth of the
population
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in just a few
years
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and reach almost 30% by the year 2040. In conclusion, the life expectancies of the older
population
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have risen over the
years
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and will continue to
rise
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in the future as well.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, years, rise with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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