The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices ot three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices ot three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
line chart depicts the changes in the average prices per month for three types of metals:
Copper
, Nickel and Zinc. In 2014. It is clear from
this
graph that,
Copper
shows a steady pattern for the whole period.
According to
what is shown, the percentage of nickel dropped significantly from 6
cent
to
-3
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3
per
cent
between January and June,
then
in July levelled until September after increasing by 1% in June, After that, there was a slight dip in October
it
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soared to 1 per
cent
in November and December.
Copper
and zinc
on the other hand
,
although
copper
increased between January and February from 1% to 3%, both sunk
at the end
of the first five months to 5 per
cent
and around 0.5 per
cent
respectively,
however
, the ratio kept growing until steadied in July to September
then
both of them had dipped slightly around 0.1%,
nevertheless
the percentage of average prices increased it the end of the interval to 2 per
cent
for Zinck and near 1,5 per
cent
for
copper
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dip" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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