The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015.
This
bar chart illustrates the proportion of women who studied in higher education from 5 different countries between 1980 and 2015. The units are out of 100%. Overall
, we can see that the number of female education level in 2015 is higher than in 1980 in 4 countries and only 1 had no change.
The highest increase was in the UK. The start was about 35%, then
grew by 20% to 55% in 2015. There was the same behaviour in the USA despite the starting point that was approximately 38% and rose to 58%.
However
, we found no change in Australia. The study level remained the same both in 1980 and 2015 at 58%. Moreover
, there was a slight gap in France. The percentage grew about 5% from 50% to 55% in 1980 to 2015, respectively. Lastly
, Followed with South Korea, although
they started from 15% in 1980 the education level increased to twice around 30% in 2015.Submitted by shayakornsupasatit on
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