The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the mean proportions of three harmful nutrients consumed in
breakfast
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,
lunch
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,
dinner
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, and
snacks
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by Americans.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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people living in the USA tend to choose unhealthy food for
dinner
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and
snacks
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,
whereas
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these detrimental nutrients are moderately included in
breakfast
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and
lunch
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. The first thing to be seen is sodium. It is noticeable that almost one-fourth of the total sodium is consumed during evening meals, and approximately one-third of it is used in
lunch
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. Meanwhile, the proportions of
this
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nutrient are evenly distributed in the category of
breakfast
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and
snacks
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(14% each).
Moreover
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, the percentages of saturated fat used in
breakfast
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and
lunch
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remain almost the same compared to the previously mentioned nutrients.
However
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, less saturated fat is consumed during
dinner
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(37%),
while
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more of
that is
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contained in
snacks
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.
In addition
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, the percentage of added sugar is mostly found in the segment of
snacks
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(42%),
whereas
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it is smaller in the segments of
dinner
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(23%),
Lunch
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(19%), and
breakfast
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(16%).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words breakfast, lunch, dinner, snacks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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