The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduates students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The bar graph illustrates a number of undergraduate and postgraduates who did not prefer
to go full-time after their graduation in 2008.
Overall
, a large proportion of students who
came from both sides(excluding full-time work) and were chosen to go for higher studies in particular
periods of time in the United Kingdom.
To begin
, the first record witnessed without full-time job a plethora of UK undergraduates registered for further
study at 89,665, followed by part-time workers at 12,735. Moreover
, some of them were unemployed at 16,235. The remaining proportion of them was doing voluntary work at 3,500 in the UK in the year of 2008.
According to
the data second chart shows most postgraduates were registered in further
studies
approximately 2,725 in the year of 2008. Meanwhile, part-time employees who completed their
higher education around 2,535, followed by those who were unemployed at 1,625. it was less
than graduates. Finally
, the least amount of them. interested in voluntary work approximately 345
in the UK in the year of 2008.Submitted by katrvn.subramaniyan on
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