The charts below show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960, 2010.
The provided four pie charts discuss the changes in the workforce breakdown between 1960 and 2010 in
town
A and town
B
. This
essay aims to summarize the differences observed during this
period in both towns.
In town
A, there was a substantial decrease in the percentage of workers employed in the manufacturing and sales sectors, amounting to almost half. In contrast
, the services sector
experienced a significant increase, approximately doubling its manpower. On the other hand
, town
B
displayed a different trend. The manufacturing sector
saw a decline of 12% in its workforce, while
the services sector
witnessed a rise of 15%. The sales sector
in town
B
only experienced a slight growth of around 2%.
Overall
, there was a notable decrease in most sectors of town
A, except for the manufacturing sector
, which thrived. Conversely
, town
B
did not witness significant changes. Manufacturing remained the dominant sector
in town
B
, while
the services sector
experienced similar improvements as in town
A.Submitted by 3zoz.d18 on
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