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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #lives #change
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There is no denying the fact that there are many ideas about changing and
life
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. It is a commonly held belief that
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 doing the same routine is one of the best ways to live,
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 an argument that change is the best thing all the time.
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 of
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 and express my opinion. On one hand,
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 used to your
life
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 is a crucial thing to start to improve your skills.
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, you can focus on your habits and do more and more.
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, is hard to learn something new and will take
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 time,
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, if you want to love
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, it will take months or maybe years, though it take time
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 your
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 love to change their
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,
they
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want to expand their lives and do their best. It is
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it
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feel
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 like a new age for you it will feel like you
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a
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young.
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challenging
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the
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life
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happiness for some people it will make them energetic and delightful.
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, if you did not go
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hiking before in
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life
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, that can be a fun thing to do. In conclusion, there is no easy answer to
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, I tend to believe, we ought to do new things as going
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camping or learning a new language.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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