Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that there are many ideas about changing and
life
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doing the same routine is one of the best ways to live,
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and express my opinion. On one hand,
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used to your
life
is a crucial thing to start to improve your skills.
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, you can focus on your habits and do more and more.
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love to change their
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want to expand their lives and do their best. It is
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like a new age for you it will feel like you
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young.
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life
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happiness for some people it will make them energetic and delightful.
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hiking before in
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life
, that can be a fun thing to do. In conclusion, there is no easy answer to
this
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camping or learning a new language.
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