In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this? What can be learned from this? (Write 250 words.) ________
It is apparent that currently,the financial upswing has impacted many
countries
that have good cash flow in developed and developing countries
. By the way, the developed sites feel unfair once compared to the past. From my point of view, we can learn many things that are described in the following paragraph.
It is truly (true)to say that right now the global economy is getting richer because developing countries
support each other. Then
, they have been doing agreements about trade wars with big countries
. For example
, Southeast Asia became the ASEAN to negotiate with China or the EU about import and export. So, this
leads to the Asian benefit of the prices when they order or exchange goods. Furthermore
, right now the information or data is easy to review by
internet platforms, the developing Change preposition
via
countries
can understand more and faster than before had the
Correct article usage
apply
computer
.
Fix the agreement mistake
computers
Addinally
(Correct your spelling
Additionally
additionally
), right now the parents of developing countries
earn a lot of money that can support their own cheriends
(children), Correct your spelling
friends
cherries
study
abroad Correct word choice
and study
such
as in the USA, The UK etc. After they finished
their degree. They have English ability and a high standard at university. Wrong verb form
finish
Then
, heading
back to their Wrong verb form
they head
countries
and working
for an international company in their hometown. They have the efficiency of working the same as the Wrong verb form
work
head
office
in developed countries
in some positions that
Correct pronoun usage
which
lead
for VP to compare the wage per hour to think twice about cost saving of some positions between the brunch in southeast Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
asia
(Asia) vs their Change the capitalization
Asia
head
office
, why VP should pay salary higher than in their country once the output of working is same.
In summary, it is not surprising that educated countries
don’t like the developing economy nowadays. Firstly
, they support and group ASEAN to have more strong points to negotiate with China or the USA in terms of import and export goods. Secondary
, Replace the word
Secondly
New
generation Correct article usage
the New
of
Thailand, Indonesia and Vietnam Change preposition
from
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
chance
Correct article usage
a chance
studying
abroad Change the verb form
to study
that
they have Correct word choice
apply
ability
Add an article
the ability
of working
Replace the preposition
to work
same
as Correct article usage
the same
head
Correct article usage
the head
office
and the rate of money per hour lower
than in developed Add a missing verb
is lower
countries
. Finally
, once head
Correct article usage
the head
office
in the USA need
to downsize Change the verb form
needs
organization
, Now a day some company will eliminate their own employee Correct article usage
the organization
base
on Wrong verb form
based
cost
per unit in developing lower than them that Correct article usage
the cost
why
people in developed Add a missing verb
is why
countries
feel hate or unfair in
Change preposition
apply
this
situation.Submitted by kanchanakularathna1991 on
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