The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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The given bar chart illustrates the cost of one country's exports in different categories from 2015 to 2016.
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table demonstrates the changes in percentages in every category of exports between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
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, it is crystal clear that export earnings show fluctuations during
this
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period of time. By exporting petroleum
products
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, engineered goods and textiles they made much more money than gems and jewellery in 2016.
In addition
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, the value of gems and jewellery went down
while
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other things went up. To go into detail, petroleum
products
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and engineered goods were the highest earnings between 2015 and 2016.
Additionally
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, those two
products
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had growth to just over 60 billion. Whilst, agricultural
products
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and textiles were the lowest earning
products
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during
this
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period
although
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they had some advantages which are over 30 billion.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words products with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • trend analysis
  • anomalies
  • percentage change
  • sector analysis
  • global demand
  • domestic production
  • economic conditions
  • technological advancements
  • international regulations
  • economic growth
  • trade relations
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