The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The given bar chart illustrates the cost of one country's exports in different categories from 2015 to 2016.
While
table demonstrates the changes in percentages in every category of exports between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, it is crystal clear that export earnings show fluctuations during this
period of time. By exporting petroleum products
, engineered goods and textiles they made much more money than gems and jewellery in 2016. In addition
, the value of gems and jewellery went down while
other things went up.
To go into detail, petroleum products
and engineered goods were the highest earnings between 2015 and 2016. Additionally
, those two products
had growth to just over 60 billion. Whilst, agricultural products
and textiles were the lowest earning products
during this
period although
they had some advantages which are over 30 billion.Submitted by sevinch.ibragimova5696 on
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