You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The charts illustrate and compare the proportions and
time
that people of the two
genders, male and female, engage in household activities.
Generally speaking, it can be surmised that cooking and cleaning are the two
most popular activies
. Correct your spelling
activities
Along with
that, they also
take up the most time
across the board. Not only that, there are many differences in the distribution of housework between the two
sexes.
Looking closer, women are observed to do house chores at higher rates than men. This
can be understood through the 20% gap that females outrank their counterpart
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counterparts
with
in both cooking and cleaning. Men spend less Change preposition
apply
time
engaging in housework as well, with cooking and cleaning only taking up to only
60 and 40 minutes respectively compared to women's 80 and 70 minutes.
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apply
In
the contrary to these figures, pet care and house repairs are proven to be outliers. The rates of the Change the preposition
On
two
sexes engaging in pet care, along with
the time
spent on pets, are equal with minor differences. Along with
that, house repairs are more popular with males in general.Submitted by k2englishcenter on
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