The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information and compare where relevant, by selecting and reporting the key features.
The table illustrates the figure of adults who participated in four leisure activities ( Reading, Animated play, Playing and photography) in urban and rural
areas
in 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, what stands out from the data is that in both years reading accounts for the highest percentage in both areas
on the other hand
animated play is the lowest.
In 1990, the rural and urban areas
had the highest participants
in reading (71 and 61 ,respectively). Replace the word
participation
Moreover
, it continued to dominate even after 10 years at 78 in both places. However
, Photography has the smallest value in the city and countryside ( at 14 and 7, respectively).
Furthermore
, in 2010, it is noticeable that the number of people who were engaged in playing decreased significantly in the
rural Correct article usage
apply
place
from 21 to 14, Fix the agreement mistake
places
whereas
the number in rural remained unchanged at 26. The opposite happened to the animated play while
the number never changed in the urban area throughout the given period at 10, rural areas
dropped from 18 to 14.Submitted by Anneya
on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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