The two pie charts shows the employment pattern in great Britain in 1992

The pie charts depict how

much

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percentage

of

male

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males

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and

female

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females

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worked

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who worked

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in Manual and Non-manual

jobs

in

great

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Britain in the year 1992.

Overall

maximum

percentage

of women worked in Clerical or related

jobs

whereas

the highest number of

men

had Managerial and Professional roles.

Firstly

, in craft or similar employment , both

male

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males

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and

female

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females

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had nearly

same

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the same

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percentage

of people

worked

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working

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of

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apply

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around 27%. Only 6%

men

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of men

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worked in clerical or related

jobs

on

other

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the other

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hand

this

job contributed to the maximum

percentage

in

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of

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women.General labourers had only 1% of

female

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females

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and 2% of

male

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males

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woked

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working

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and

thus

this

role had the

least

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lowest

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percentage

of people worked in both male and female side 36% of boys worked in Managerial and Professional roles

however

only 29% of girls had

this

role.

Other

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In other

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manual roles

had

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apply

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24% of

men

worked

however

in females only 3% worked . 6%

men

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of men

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and 9%

women

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of women

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had other non-manual

jobs

.