The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.
The given
barchart
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bar chart
indicates the approximate global
illiteracy
percentages by
continents
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and by two genders for the
last
year.
Overall
, at
the
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first
glance
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it is clear that
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females
had the most
illireacy
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illiteracy
rate
in all regions with the most percentage in South
Asia
. The
least
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rate
of
illiteracy
was registered in developed countries
while
the most in South
Asia
. From the chart , developed
countries
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countries'
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illiteracy
percentage was near zero following it Latin American region with
males
10
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percent
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and
females
just above 10
percent
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. East
asia
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Asia
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males
registered less than 10
percent
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per cent
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illliteracy
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illiteracy
literacy
rate
while
females
had more than double
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the male's
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male's
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male
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percenatage
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percentage
by 20%. In Sub-Saharan
Africa
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the rates nearly tripled compared to East
Asia
males
and
females
accordingly
32 and 48
percent
. Arab states had the second largest
illiteracy
rate
after South
Asia
with male's
percent
just under 30 and female's over 50. South
Asia
with the most
illiteracy
percentage registered for
females
just under 60 and for
males
about 35
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, females, rate, asia, males, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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