A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview.

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Dear Sir, I read the advertisement for your restaurant the previous day in the local newspaper and I would like to apply for the interview for the job. I merely completed my studies at Dehradun College of Hospitality with distinction. Previously, I had done a part-time job in an icy spicy Italian restaurant for nearly two years, when I was pursuing my degree.

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have good knowledge of Italian cuisine, as you mentioned in the advertisement. By nature, I have qualities of being calm, and respectful and I can efficiently work in pressurized situations. If it is fine for you, can I appear for the interview on Saturday as I am travelling to Mumbai at my uncle's house for 2 days

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Looking forward to the beneficial reply from your side. Thanks for your time and consideration. Yours Faithfully, Dhrumil Patel

patels Mon Sep 11 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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