You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show reasons why people left the UK for other countries and why people stayed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie charts below show reasons why people left the UK for other countries and why people stayed  in the UK.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The first pie graph illustrates data regarding the division of
reasons
Use synonyms
which lead the
UK
Use synonyms
residents to leave their country. The second chart demonstrates the proportional amount of people who choose to stay in the United Kingdom.
Overall
Linking Words
, the charts show that the greatest proportion of both groups is the reason for joining family and friends.
Additionally
Linking Words
, language plays a crucial role in British people's choices as the second factor of staying or leaving their country. In terms of why people left the
UK
Use synonyms
, life quality demands the lowest needs of British residents at just 9%. Financial
reasons
Use synonyms
and employment are the next category which cause
this
Linking Words
phenomenon, taking up 10% and 18% of it respectively. Weather is the second important factor in
this
Linking Words
case with almost a quarter,
while
Linking Words
more than a third of them reported that joining family and friends is their actual reason to leave the
UK
Use synonyms
. Turning to the motivations for staying in Britain, similar
reasons
Use synonyms
with nearly the same percentages had been reported. Life quality again reports the lowest figure, contributing an insignificant minority, financial
reasons
Use synonyms
are responsible for 17% and employment with 19%. A quarter choose to stay because of their mother tongue,
whereas
Linking Words
over 30% remain in the
UK
Use synonyms
due to
Linking Words
their loved ones.
Submitted by mahanmxd on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words reasons, uk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: