Many people today prefer to socialise online rather than spend time with friends in the local community. To what extend do advantages outweight disadvantages?

Nowadays many human

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opt to spend their

time

online

instead

of meeting

friends

and hanging out with them,

while

a

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least figure of people

choose

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to meet

there

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their

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best

friends

out

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.

Neverethless

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there are

a

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relevant disadvantages.

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essay will argue that

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I feel that for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

one

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commonly cited

disadvantages

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of humans who prefer to discuss with their

friends

online than meeting them

,

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will suffer from

couple

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of problems in their lives.

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as

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speaking publicly and preparing for a presentation, etc. Despite

this

, people who

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spend

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their

time

on

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social

media rather than utilize it for education or building a business, their mental health and well-being will

sacrifice

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.

For instance

, my Brother has been spending his

time

online

overdose

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right

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now he has an illness, he can't

speaks

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with in his social life. Despite

this

, there are a number of significant benefits to the notion if they

preference

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to socialise with

friends

or families online than go out with them.

Additionally

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they can organize their

time

of

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talking,

also

, studying at the same

time

,

instead

of meeting them for

an hours

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you can

discussed

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whith

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with

them

merely

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a minute or

one hour

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maximum.

For example

, I choose to chat with my

friends

online rather than sitting in the local community, I have been

found

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an extra hours

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on my planning,

instead

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and instead

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of that

i

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consume a little bit of energy.

To conclude

,

although

there are

drowbacks

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drawbacks

if humans

talking

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talk

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daily online they will suffer from

multi

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symptoms physically and mentally,

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the satisfaction is the

time

that

include

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triviality will

decreased

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