Mrs Barrett,An english speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours in a day next summer.Write a letter to mirs Barrett --suggest how could you help her in her work. --say why you like to do this job. --when you will and not be will avaible. write at least 150 words.Dont need to write the adress.

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I'm writing in regard to the work advertisement for a summer period I saw on the Internet. I have three years of experience in the local 1001 Xirdavat centre which specialises in crafting and mechanics. The owner used to entrust the most responsible orders to me and we had zero negative feedback. I will attach my references and the contact number of Mr. Bubu, the owner of the market. I'm interested in

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job as I was looking for a part-time job for the duration of

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summer in order to be able to do both - cover my bills and study for the exam in September.

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, your place is located on the same street as the Library and it is very convenient for me. The library operates all day long

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I'm flexible with time.

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have to leave for the countryside on Sundays as I have to visit my grandparents every week. Look forward to your response and hope you will be satisfied with my resume. Faithfully Yours Dudu

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

176 words

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