You and your neighbours have noticed that the rubbish collection services where you live have recently been quite bad. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter, – explain what you have recently experienced – explain what the neighbours have recently experienced – ask what action will be taken to improve the service

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain

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about the garbage collection service at 10 Kings Street, which does not comply with hygiene standards. I am Jennifer Ramos, a resident in the Down Town in Kings

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, we have been experiencing some issues regarding rubbish collection after the new contracting company started to collect the rubbish.

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Sunday and Thursday they should collect the waste from the larger bin

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inside our compound but unfortunately they are not punctual to do that.

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refuse to take larger

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as broken furniture and electrical products. My

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raised the complaint to the people who came

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waste, but they are argued with him and not ready to collect waste that day. Even though the collection day is on Sunday, they came only on Wednesday. We are requesting your kind action to resolve

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issue. We are requesting you to arrange a meeting with them to discuss

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the improvement of their service. Yours faithfully, Jennifer Ramos

ck.manshadMon Sep 11 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

172 words

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