The line graphs lower depicts the changing of population in the period from 1940 to 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
The curve lower depicts the changing of
population
in the period from 1940 to 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
In 1940, Columbia
had the lowest population
of the three territories, which consisted by
approximately 25 000. Change preposition
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compared with 75 000 inhabitans
of Washington was triple what it Correct your spelling
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Columbia
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30 000
citizens in 1940.
In the years 1940-1970, there was Correct your spelling
30,000
steady
rise in the number of Yamhill`s residents from 30 000 to 45 000, Add an article
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, there has been gradual
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population
of Columbia
at around 50%. By contrast
, Washington`s demography climbed sharply from 75 000
to more than Correct your spelling
75,000
120 000
occupants between 1940 and 1970.
By 2000, for the Correct your spelling
120,000
population
of Columbia
and Yamhill counties trend was still upward, and then
there was a sharp climb for both of them. Columbia
`s population
increased considerably from 45 000
to Correct your spelling
45,000
90 000
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90,000
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