The chart below show the percentage of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other language in addition to english, in 2000 and 2010.

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the ratio of British students who can speak

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during the year 2000 and 2010.

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there was no change in the number of German speakers and students with two other languages.

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, over the whole period, the highest proportion was

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by Spanish only.

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The chart below show the percentage of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other language in addition to english, in 2000 and 2010.

Youth unemployment is increasing in many countries in the world. What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures can be taken to solve it?

Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter •give details about the concert •describe how you won the tickets •explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?

✅ Q: One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?