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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtade-lebelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtade-lebelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The group of tables interpret the data about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and
bananas
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 in five European countries
such
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 as the United Kingdom, Switzerland,
Denmark
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, Belgium and Sweden. As an Overview, there are two tables. The first illustrates coffee and the second is for
bananas
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. Fairtrade is an organisation which provides a fair price for manufacturers and farmers of the responsible countries. Each of the sales is represented in millions in Euro.
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, the UK and Switzerland marked a significant rise in all trades.
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, Belgium increased gradually. Neither Sweden nor
Denmark
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 soared in both of the following. The highest increment was the sale of
bananas
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 in Switzerland in 2004, 3 times of sale was more in 2004 than in 1999. The highest decrement was for
bananas
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 in
Denmark
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. Around, 1.1 million less than in1999. Not only
Denmark
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 but Sweden
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 depicts a loss in
bananas
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.
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 coffee had not presented a drop for any nations.
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, it doesn't give high profit for some of the countries. It gave a margin gain to them.
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, banana marks good gains and falls only.
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