Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, acts

about

Change preposition

of

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

violence

Use synonyms

increased in television programs, and

computer

Use synonyms

games

Use synonyms

.

Due to

Linking Words

this

Linking Words

, some

people

Use synonyms

think

society

Use synonyms

is affected by

this

Linking Words

in a bad

way

Use synonyms

. I totally agree with these thoughts, and

this

Linking Words

essay will tell how

people

Use synonyms

inspired

Add a missing verb

are inspired

show examples

from

Change preposition

by

show examples

the

characters

Use synonyms

who are in

TV

Use synonyms

and

computer

Use synonyms

games

Use synonyms

, and how

people

Use synonyms

normalise crime and

violence

Use synonyms

with the effects of these. In television programs

such

Linking Words

as

series

Use synonyms

and movies,

characters

Use synonyms

are designed to inspire

people

Use synonyms

, but sometimes these

characters

Use synonyms

’ behaviours can be full of

violence

Use synonyms

.

As a result

Linking Words

of that,

people

Use synonyms

, especially adolescents, copy these

characters

Use synonyms

' attitudes with some ideas that

violence

Use synonyms

, and be in crime are cool for

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

society

Use synonyms

.

For instance

Linking Words

, there was a

TV

Use synonyms

series

Use synonyms

named Kurtlar Vadisi (KV) in Türkiye and

full

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

of

characters

Use synonyms

in that

series

Use synonyms

were criminals.

However

Linking Words

, fans of that

series

Use synonyms

were inspired by KV

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

and acted like KV’s

characters

Use synonyms

such

Linking Words

as carrying guns,

using

Correct word choice

and using

show examples

slang words.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, the most dangerous thing about the

violence

Use synonyms

in

TV

Use synonyms

or

computer

Use synonyms

games

Use synonyms

is the normalization

what

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

in

Change preposition

of

show examples

these

according to

Linking Words

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

most part of

society

Use synonyms

.

Societies’

Change noun form

Societies

show examples

have their rules for living within the best

way

Use synonyms

, and these are undeniable and necessary conditions of living in the

society

Use synonyms

. But,

TV

Use synonyms

series

Use synonyms

and

computer

Use synonyms

games

Use synonyms

have rules that are opposite

of

Change preposition

to

show examples

societies’

Fix the agreement mistake

society’

show examples

rules.

Moreover

Linking Words

, if something is done by

people

Use synonyms

for million times, that can be an ordinary thing for

people

Use synonyms

.

As a result

Linking Words

of that, when the

violence

Use synonyms

in

TV

Use synonyms

programs and

computer

Use synonyms

games

Use synonyms

is seen by

people

Use synonyms

for

Change preposition

apply

show examples

so many times,

people

Use synonyms

may think these acts as normal.

For example

Linking Words

, there

were

Change the verb form

was

show examples

news about the

computer

Use synonyms

game called Call of Duty, and

according to

Linking Words

the newspapers,

people

Use synonyms

killed each other

with

Change preposition

in

show examples

the same

way

Use synonyms

in the game, and killers’ friends respect

this

Linking Words

crime

as a result

Linking Words

of seeing ordinary. In a nutshell,

TV

Use synonyms

series

Use synonyms

and

computer

Use synonyms

games

Use synonyms

which are full of

violence

Use synonyms

impose their thoughts about

violence

Use synonyms

to

Change preposition

on

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

people

Use synonyms

with

Change preposition

in

show examples

a logical

way

Use synonyms

, and

people

Use synonyms

are inspired

from

Change preposition

by

show examples

them.

Thus

Linking Words

,

people

Use synonyms

do some bad things to each other and

be

Wrong verb form

are

show examples

danger

Replace the word

dangerous

show examples

for

Change preposition

to

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

society

Use synonyms

.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, these

series

Use synonyms

and

games

Use synonyms

normalization

Replace the word

normalise

show examples

violence

Use synonyms

in the same

way

Use synonyms

.