Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion? Write at least 250 words

Nowadays, acts

about

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the

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violence

increased in television programs, and

computer

games

.

Due to

this

, some

people

think

society

is affected by

this

in a bad

way

. I totally agree with these thoughts, and

this

essay will tell how

people

inspired

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from

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the

characters

who are in

TV

and

computer

games

, and how

people

normalise crime and

violence

with the effects of these. In television programs

such

as

series

and movies,

characters

are designed to inspire

people

, but sometimes these

characters

’ behaviours can be full of

violence

.

As a result

of that,

people

, especially adolescents, copy these

characters

' attitudes with some ideas that

violence

, and be in crime are cool for

the

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society

.

For instance

, there was a

TV

series

named Kurtlar Vadisi (KV) in Türkiye and

full

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of

characters

in that

series

were criminals.

However

, fans of that

series

were inspired by KV

,

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and acted like KV’s

characters

such

as carrying guns,

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slang words.

On the other hand

, the most dangerous thing about the

violence

in

TV

or

computer

games

is the normalization

what

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in

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these

according to

the

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most part of

society

.

Societies’

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have their rules for living within the best

way

, and these are undeniable and necessary conditions of living in the

society

. But,

TV

series

and

computer

games

have rules that are opposite

of

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societies’

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rules.

Moreover

, if something is done by

people

for million times, that can be an ordinary thing for

people

.

As a result

of that, when the

violence

in

TV

programs and

computer

games

is seen by

people

for

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so many times,

people

may think these acts as normal.

For example

, there

were

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news about the

computer

game called Call of Duty, and

according to

the newspapers,

people

killed each other

with

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the same

way

in the game, and killers’ friends respect

this

crime

as a result

of seeing ordinary. In a nutshell,

TV

series

and

computer

games

which are full of

violence

impose their thoughts about

violence

to

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on

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people

with

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a logical

way

, and

people

are inspired

from

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them.

Thus

,

people

do some bad things to each other and

be

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danger

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dangerous

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for

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the

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society

.

On the other hand

, these

series

and

games

normalization

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normalise

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violence

in the same

way

.