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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The chart illustrates the
science
 qualifications conducted by persons in Malaysia and Singapore. The units are measured in
percentage
.
Overall
, the data reveals that the number of non-qualified people in
science
 is much higher than the ones in
science
.
Moreover
, the
percentage
 rate in Malaysia is leading than in Singapore. As is presented in the chart, the highest graduation certification is considered a Master's degree, was certified below 10 per cent of fellows. The rate of the Master is the same for both countries, Following a bachelor's degree Singapore has a 10% growth compared to Malaysia.
On the other hand
, the students who are attending school leaving exams
percentage
 is nearly above quarter.
According to
 the
,
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chart it is crystal clear that the plunge in the Master's degree
percentage
 shows that the students are not keenly interested in
science
 subjects. In conclusion, both of the country's governments have to focus on promoting their
science
 subjects among the children.
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