You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The chart illustrates the

science

qualifications conducted by persons in Malaysia and Singapore. The units are measured in

percentage

Overall

, the data reveals that the number of non-qualified people in

science

is much higher than the ones in

science

Moreover

, the

percentage

rate in Malaysia is leading than in Singapore. As is presented in the chart, the highest graduation certification is considered a Master's degree, was certified below 10 per cent of fellows. The rate of the Master is the same for both countries, Following a bachelor's degree Singapore has a 10% growth compared to Malaysia.

On the other hand

, the students who are attending school leaving exams

percentage

is nearly above quarter.

According to

the

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chart it is crystal clear that the plunge in the Master's degree

percentage

shows that the students are not keenly interested in

science

subjects. In conclusion, both of the country's governments have to focus on promoting their

science

subjects among the children.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.

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5 paragraphs

158 words

7.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are marries or single. some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.