The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph line indicates the monthly price changing mean of copper, nickel and zinc throughout 2014. It is evident from the graph provided that Nickel saw the most fluctuation from somewhere between 6

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and -3

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. Dramatic Decreasing from 6

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in January to 1

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in

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, the figure remained steady for

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,

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it plunged to a low of -3

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in June,

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it started to climb to high of -1

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which is followed by no change during the next three month

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a gradual fall prior to increasing to 1

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and staying there until December happened. A glance at the graph reveals striking similarities between Zink and Copper, Zinc increasing from 1

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to 3

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suddenly, followed by a sustained fall to the low of -1

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in June,

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any noticeable changes until October,

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it climbed to the high of 2

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, meanwhile copper saw a gradual decrease from January to June.

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next following 3

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the figure remained steady

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approximately 1

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and

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it fluctuated between 0.5

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and 1.5

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until December.