The charts below show the percentage of water used for different puposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different puposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
As per the below pie charts mentioned it depicts the
water
usage
for six areas of the
world
. The three major categories of
water
usagein the
world
are for Agricultural
use
, Industrial
use
and domestic
use
.
Water
is the most important resource in the
world
for Human life on earth, without
water
there would be no life on our planet Earth.
However
, with increased population in the
world
the
usage
of
water
is
also
increased. Below are the 6 areas mentioned with the
water
usage
in 3 different sectors: 1. North America: Here the maximum
usage
of
water
is consumed by Industrail
sector
with 48% following with Agricultural
sector
with 39% and 135% with domestic
sector
2.South America: The maximum
water
consumption here is for Agrucultural
sector
with 71%, 19% for domestic
sector
and industrial
sector
with 10%. 3. Europe: The maximum
water
consumption here is for Industrial
sector
with 53%, 32% for Agricultural
sector
and domesticsector with 15% 4. Africa: The maximum
water
consumption here is for 84% for agricultural
sector
, following with 9% domestic and 7% industrial
sector
. 5. Central Asia: Here the
usage
is 88% for agricultural
use
, 7% domestic
use
and 5% industrial
use
. 6. South East Asia: Here the
usage
is highest for 81% agricultural
use
, 12% industrial
use
and 7% domestic
use
.
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  • charts
  • percentage
  • water usage
  • regions
  • North America
  • Europe
  • Africa
  • Asia
  • Oceania
  • South America
  • agriculture
  • industrial usage
  • domestic use
  • significant differences
  • contributor
  • proportion
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