The charts below show the percentage of water used for different puposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
As per the below pie charts mentioned it depicts the
water
usage
for six areas of the world
.
The three major categories of water
usagein the world
are for Agricultural use
, Industrial use
and domestic use
. Water
is the most important resource in the world
for Human life on earth, without water
there would be no life on our planet Earth. However
, with increased population in the world
the usage
of water
is also
increased. Below are the 6 areas mentioned with the water
usage
in 3 different sectors:
1. North America: Here the maximum usage
of water
is consumed by Industrail sector
with
48% following with Agricultural sector
with 39% and 135% with domestic sector
2.South America: The maximum water
consumption here is for Agrucultural sector
with 71%, 19% for domestic sector
and industrial sector
with 10%.
3. Europe: The maximum water
consumption here is for Industrial sector
with 53%, 32% for Agricultural sector
and domesticsector with 15%
4. Africa: The maximum water
consumption here is for 84% for agricultural sector
, following with 9% domestic and 7% industrial sector
.
5. Central Asia: Here the usage
is 88% for agricultural use
, 7% domestic use
and 5% industrial use
.
6. South East Asia: Here the usage
is highest for 81% agricultural use
, 12% industrial use
and
7% domestic use
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