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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different puposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different puposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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As per the below pie charts mentioned it depicts the
water
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usage
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 for six areas of the
world
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. The three major categories of
water
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 usagein the
world
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 are for Agricultural
use
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, Industrial
use
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 and domestic
use
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.
Water
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 is the most important resource in the
world
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 for Human life on earth, without
water
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 there would be no life on our planet Earth.
However
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, with increased population in the
world
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 the
usage
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 of
water
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 is
also
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 increased. Below are the 6 areas mentioned with the
water
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usage
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 in 3 different sectors: 1. North America: Here the maximum
usage
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 of
water
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 is consumed by Industrail
sector
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 with 48% following with Agricultural
sector
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 with 39% and 135% with domestic
sector
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 2.South America: The maximum
water
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 consumption here is for Agrucultural
sector
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 with 71%, 19% for domestic
sector
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 and industrial
sector
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 with 10%. 3. Europe: The maximum
water
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 consumption here is for Industrial
sector
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 with 53%, 32% for Agricultural
sector
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 and domesticsector with 15% 4. Africa: The maximum
water
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 consumption here is for 84% for agricultural
sector
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, following with 9% domestic and 7% industrial
sector
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. 5. Central Asia: Here the
usage
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 is 88% for agricultural
use
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, 7% domestic
use
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 and 5% industrial
use
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. 6. South East Asia: Here the
usage
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 is highest for 81% agricultural
use
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, 12% industrial
use
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 and 7% domestic
use
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage, world, use, sector with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • percentage
  • water usage
  • regions
  • North America
  • Europe
  • Africa
  • Asia
  • Oceania
  • South America
  • agriculture
  • industrial usage
  • domestic use
  • significant differences
  • contributor
  • proportion
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