Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studing for a qualification. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

There has been an

argue

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among two different groups of people about the suitability of learning another subject alongside

university

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a university

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major for

students

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. In the current essay,

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will explain it

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and

also

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i

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personally put forward the idea that

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can be

healpful

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helpful

in some fields of study. As

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controversial matter, some

students

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need their own full attention to dedicate to one special topic. As some

of

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apply

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majors are highly sensitive to even small changes, slight distractions can result in negative consequences.

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,

Nursary

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Nursery

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is a major which deals with people's health and

thier

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their

vital signs under absolutely critical

situation

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. In

this

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case,

students

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should just try to memorize every single detail of their

patients

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patient's

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well-being.

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it more clear, considering a nurse showing intense interest in learning a foreign language in his workplace, can be

stressfull

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stressful

for both

patient's

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the patient's

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companies

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company

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as well as

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their colleagues.

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, it is almost

uncalled-for

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some

group

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groups

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of

students

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to expand their knowledge in other fields. On the other side, in some majors which are multidiscipline adding up more information

gaiend

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gained

from other subjects, can be beneficial for

students

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.

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, Tourism is highly combined and intertwined with other majors

such

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as marketing or

haspitality

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hospitality

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cases

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students

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have a

privilage

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privilege

to utilise their knowledge in a profitable way.

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, if student

decide

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to combine their accumulated knowledge with their main field, they gain

higher

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a higher

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level of

crativity

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creativity

and

borden

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broaden

their horizons in the future.

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, they will have a higher chance of employment when it comes to their job prospects ,

also

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more job opportunities in the future.

in

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a nutshell, some

fileds

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fields

files

are susceptible to more creativity and learning

another subjects

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another subject

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would be a great help for

students

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to improve their critical thinking.

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, in some sensitive subjects taking

this

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action is less likely to change anything in

fovour

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front

of people.