The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1996, 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1996, 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts depict information about the percentage of
people
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who used four different types of vehicles in the UK in the
years
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1965,1985 and 2005.
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, the highest proportion of
people
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used Private cars
while
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the lowest proportion of
people
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used Recreational
vehicle
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in all the
years
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considered.
To begin
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with, in the initial
years
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, Recreational vehicles were used by 12%.
This
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figure decreased in the next 20
years
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to the value of 5% followed by a small percentage change of 3% touching 8% in the
year
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2005. The same pattern was seen
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Public transportation, where
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% value in the
year
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1965 decreased to 20% in 1985 and rose by 2% reaching 22% in the final
year
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. It is evident that the proportion of
people
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who travelled via trucks stayed constant in the
years
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1965 and 1985 but showed an increment in the
last
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year
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of the given period.
To conclude
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, private car usage increased
continously
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continuously
in the subsequent
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and
finally
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reached 60% in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, years, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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