It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teacher be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
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punishment
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However
, parents and teacher should not beat their Linking Words
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children
instead
should deprive them of something they love.
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punishment
because they will be treated in the same way later in life by their teachers and the police. A lack of discipline at home often leads to delinquency later in life because the person has not been Use synonyms
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that there will be consequences to breaking the rules. Correct your spelling
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Therefore
, parents have a responsibility to punish their Linking Words
children
to help them become responsible citizens in the future. Use synonyms
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, Singapore has one of the lowest crime rates globally, and Linking Words
this
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children
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such
as littering or chewing gum.
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punishment
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child
that the answer to a problem is to beat someone, resulting in a young person becoming prone to violence. A better Use synonyms
punishment
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such
as their favourite toy or TV show or Linking Words
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exmperience
without physical abuse. Correct your spelling
experience
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children
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demostrating
that the victim can often become the perpetrator.
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age because it will teach the Correct your spelling
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child
what is acceptable and unacceptable later in life; Use synonyms
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