The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.   Write at least 150 words.   (20 mins.)
The diagram illustrates the
water
cycle, which is the continuous process of
water
on
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above, and below the surface of the world.
Overall
, the
water
in the
ocean
is changed 2 status.
Such
as liquid and vapour, which go through the heat and cold
air
above the surface of the earth,
then
all of the
water
falls into the ground again. First of all,
water
in the
ocean
is changed by heat from the sun and becomes a stream floating to the sky in the evaporation process, which contributes about 80% of the total
water
in the
air
. When floating up to hit the cold
air
,
vapour
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the vapour
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is condensed and gathered in groups called clouds. After that, Clous is changed status by getting extremely cold
air
and becoming liquid, or what is called rain, which falls
into
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the surface of the world. In the next step, the
water
is absorbed into the soil, which goes through and combines with the underground
water
and the
ocean
. The
water
in the
ocean
, when heated by the sun, will evaporate again. It is a cycle that never ends.
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