The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The diagram illustrates the

water

cycle, a continuous process involving the movement of

water

through various stages on, above, and below the Earth’s surface. The cycle begins with the evaporation process mostly originates from the ocean’s

water

due to

the heat of the sun. As

timed

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passed

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the

water

vapor

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vapour

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rises into the atmosphere, where it cools and condenses to form clouds.

Hence

,

water

vapor

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vapour

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becomes precipitation,

such

as rain or snow, which falls back to the Earth’s surface.

In

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a result of

raining

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rain

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or snowing, some of it

was

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resorbed by

absorbable

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an absorbable

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soil layer and becomes groundwater, which can flow towards the ocean. There is a risk of saltwater penetration when groundwater meets the ocean.

In the

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rest of

water

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the water

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accumulates in

river

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rivers

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,

bay

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bays

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or lakes.

Overall

, the

water

cycle is a continuous and self-sustaining process, The ocean plays

major

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role

to ensure

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in ensuring

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a balance in

water

distribution through natural mechanisms.