The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
The picture diagram shows the continuous movement of the
water
cycle in the
nature, from the ocean to above and below the Correct article usage
apply
surface
of the earth.
Firstly
, about 80% of water
comes from ocean. It vapors
Change the spelling
vapours
to
the air by the heat of the sun and Change preposition
into
then
becomes water
vapor
. Change the spelling
vapour
Then
the water
condenses and forms the
cloud above the Correct article usage
a
earth
Change noun form
earth's
surface
.
Then
, the cloud formation leads to precipitation. The rain
Correct your spelling
rainwater
water
is collected in lakes on the earth
Change noun form
earth's
surface
. Another source of the water
is from snow on the top of the mountain. The gravity and the surface
runoff make the water
goes
through the ground and Correct subject-verb agreement
go
becomes
Correct subject-verb agreement
become
ground
Correct your spelling
groundwater
water
below the surface
called impervious
layer.
Correct article usage
the impervious
Lastly
, the ground
Correct your spelling
groundwater
water
runs through the entrance of the ocean again at the salt
Correct your spelling
saltwater
water
intrusion where the salt water
meets the fresh water
, results
Wrong verb form
resulting
in
the beginning of the next Change the preposition
at
water
cycle.Submitted by kanchanakularathna1991 on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 92%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, surface with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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