you and your family have just come back from a holiday staying in a rented apartment overlooking the sea. The apartment was very unsatisfactory. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the agency from which you rented the apartment. In your letter, – give details of the things that were unsatisfactory – explain the reactions of the members of your family – ask the manager what he/she is going to do about the situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the new
which I rented from your good office. I am Jennifer Ramos, the person who rented
105 in the Park Avenue residential complex
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King's Beach Road. I
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been on holiday in Spain for the
three months with my family. I booked an
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your agency.
I was booking the room, I confirmed that the
had a sea view, but ,
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when I arrived at the
, the view of the sea was blocked by another building.
, some of the furniture is broken and my wife is annoyed by that. The air conditioner in the kid's bedroom is not functioning properly, so my kids felt exhausted
night .
, I am requesting you to change my
as soon as possible. The property is completely different from the pictures we received. Let me know if you have any other property with a sea view. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jennifer Ramos
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