The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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map illustrates the changes in the
school
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building from 1985 to the present time. There are a lot of changes
occurred
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in the structure of
school
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building
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buildings
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and the population of students in
school
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is
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increased from 1500 to 2300 students.
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with, there are a lot of innovative initiatives taken by management. To reduce the hustle of traffic in the
school
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, a proper pathway is now made for parking and now no one is allowed to enter their car into
school
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. In 1985, the
school
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had only playing fields in a huge area but now, some of the places
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given to a pool and the fitness centre as well.
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, the library is converted into a learning resource centre and a computer room to eliminate the lack of technology. A car park near the library is
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removed. In 1985, there were 3 storeys of classroom block in
school
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but now, the
school
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has 3 storeys of the classroom. There are
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classrooms constructed below the computer centre. These changes will boost student's learning outcomes.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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