The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
map illustrates the changes in the school
building from 1985 to the present time. There are a lot of changes occurred
in the structure of Wrong verb form
occurring
school
building
and the population of students in Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
school
is also
increased from 1500 to 2300 students.
To begin
with, there are a lot of innovative initiatives taken by management. To reduce the hustle of traffic in the school
, a proper pathway is now made for parking and now no one is allowed to enter their car into school
. In 1985, the school
had only playing fields in a huge area but now, some of the places is
given to a pool and the fitness centre as well.
Change the verb form
are
Furthermore
, the library is converted into a learning resource centre and a computer room to eliminate the lack of technology. A car park near the library is also
removed. In 1985, there were 3 storeys of classroom block in school
but now, the school
has 3 storeys of the classroom. There are also
classrooms constructed below the computer centre. These changes will boost student's learning outcomes.Submitted by khannaughty26 on
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