The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make companies where relevant.

The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make companies where relevant.
The bar charts give information about the causes of the study in terms of students' different age phases and the funds they obtained from
employers
. It is clear from the first chart that two learning purposes, for
career
and for interest, show completely opposite trends, with the proportion of the former increasing as students become older. The second chart illustrates that the level of
employers
' supporting willingness decreased first and increased when
employees
were over their thirties. The percentage of learning for a
career
was highest when learners were under 26, at around 80%.
Then
the proportion decreased as the age increased. Only about 20% of
people
over 49 studied for a
career
.
However
, the pattern was the opposite with regard to studying for
career
purposes. Merely around 10% of students under 26 chose to study for interests, and the proportions continually went up as ages grew.
People
in their forties shared balanced views of reasons for learning. About 70% of
people
over 49 preferred to study for interests. From
employers
' perspectives, younger
employees
were more worthwhile to invest in.
Employees
under 26% could receive more than 60% support from
employers
.
Then
the proportion shrank for the older groups.
People
aged between 30 and 39 saw the lowest level of
employers
' support, with about 30%. After their forties,
employees
could be entitled to 50% of learning support by
employers
.
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