The table illustrates the 6 languages which are the most popular in the world with the number of people use it.

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The table illustrates the significant number of population speaking in six different languages.

Overall

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, the three popular speaking languages are Mandarin

Chinese

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, English and Hindi

while

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Spanish, Arabic and Portuguese are collectively less common than

Chinese

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Firstly

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, The most popular language which has the proportion used in communication is

Chinese

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, It has the largest number of original speakers 900 million and it

also

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has 190 million who can speak an additional language.

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, English is the second but it doesn't have the same trend as

Chinese

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with regard to the number of bilingual languages

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words chinese with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

94 words

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The table illustrates the 6 languages which are the most popular in the world with the number of people use it.

Students should pay the full of cost for their own study because a university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Some say that children should be taught at school to recycling and avoid waste. Others say they should learn at home. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Question: you are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. writ a letter to your employer. in your letter --explain your situation --describe your problems --tell him/her when you think you can start