These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their families with them. Do you think adavantages of this outweigh the disadvantages in terms of family development.

Nowadays it
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trend to
work
abroad and take their families with them. As every coin
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same
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ways
this
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advantage
as well as
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a disadvantage
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. In my opinion,
this
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more advantages.
Firstly
, As many
people
leave their
country
to
work
abroad
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so many
advanatges
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advantages
. As a
person
will go to another nation that he or she will
expericence
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experience
a lot. The
person
will develop in all ways. When
person
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will
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reture
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returns
back
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then
it will
benefits
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its own
country
in many ways.
For example
, if
a women
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a woman
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will go
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goes
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in
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another
country
for
work
then
she will take her family
as well as
children
then
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children will learn new things and
family
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will
also
get more and more knowledge.
Hence
,
this
have
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many
benfits
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benefits
for both the nation and
person
as well as
family.
Secondly
,
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, there are even
disadavantage
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disadvantage
disadvantages
like older
people
in
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family
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families
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have
to face more and more
problem
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problems
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in
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food and in
a
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language
also
. The
country
in which
there
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are
leaving
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will face problems like sending good
people
outside.
For example
, if a man will
leav
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leave
their
country
to
work
in another nation
then
he will take
he
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kids with them and
there
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their
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kids will face
problem
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problems
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in making new friends and
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adopting
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enverinment
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environment
.
Thus
, a
person
should think before going
to
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abroad.
Thirdly
,
Government
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the Government
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should increase
opporunties
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opportunities
for
people
who are
planing
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planning
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to go
abroads
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abroad
.
To conclude
,
people
leaving their
country
to
work
abroad and take their families with them
have
equal
adavantages
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advantages
as well as
disadvanatge
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disadvantage
disadvantages
. In my opinion,
this
have
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more
advanatges
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advantages
.
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