The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the wide range of post-school qualifications in Australia and the share of males and females who held them in 1999.
Overall
, we can see that the Linking Words
percentage
of female in the undergraduate Use synonyms
diploma
and bachelor's degree were more than male, Use synonyms
while
in other categories the Linking Words
percentage
of male were more than female.
In 1999, the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
men
in the skilled vocational Use synonyms
diploma
was 9 times more than Use synonyms
women
, 90% and 10% respectively. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
women
Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
with
the
undergraduate Correct article usage
an
diploma
was more than Use synonyms
men
by 35%, 70% and 35% respectively. In the bachelor's Use synonyms
degree
the proportion of Add a comma
,degree
women
and Use synonyms
men
was quite similar about 45% and 50%.
In the fourth category, the postgraduate Use synonyms
diploma
, 30% of Use synonyms
women
had the proportion, Use synonyms
whereas
Linking Words
this
number for Linking Words
men
was about 70%. In the master's degree, Use synonyms
women
compared with Use synonyms
men
had the Use synonyms
least
share about 40%, Correct word choice
lowest
while
Linking Words
men
had 60%.Use synonyms
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