The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the wide range of post-school qualifications in Australia and the share of males and females who held them in 1999.
Overall
, we can see that the percentage
of female in the undergraduate diploma
and bachelor's degree were more than male, while
in other categories the percentage
of male were more than female.
In 1999, the percentage
of men
in the skilled vocational diploma
was 9 times more than women
, 90% and 10% respectively. However
, the percentage
of women
in
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with
the
undergraduate Correct article usage
an
diploma
was more than men
by 35%, 70% and 35% respectively. In the bachelor's degree
the proportion of Add a comma
,degree
women
and men
was quite similar about 45% and 50%.
In the fourth category, the postgraduate diploma
, 30% of women
had the proportion, whereas
this
number for men
was about 70%. In the master's degree, women
compared with men
had the least
share about 40%, Correct word choice
lowest
while
men
had 60%.Submitted by shahab_e2020 on
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