Nowadays, there is a greater focus at all levels in education on science and business studies rather than the arts. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There are plenty of subjects we might

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from school,

however

, people put more attention on the education of

science

and business (trade) studies than the arts in recent years. As my personal notion , I think

this

situation has a positive impact on our society, and the following content will describe the advantages of

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opinion.

Firstly

, learning business

concept

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can assist children to realise the importance and usage of money. In current society,

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currency

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a major part in our daily

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, we use it not only

for paying

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the cost of living but

also

for the accumulation of our future fortune.

As a result

, building a basic concept of economy will be important for the teenager's career.

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, after knowing the knowledge

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, children won't waste their pocket money on useless or costly products,

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helpful and worthwhile

option

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will be taken. , is the basic motivation for the human culture to move forward. The core of the is

explore

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and expand the unknown area,

furthermore

, the innovative inventions which support our convenient lifestyle are

also

built by the scientists. A greater

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for

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children's

brain

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and capacity

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creativity will

develope

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, after absorbing the scientific way of education.

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, before learning the knowledge of

science

, Thomas

Adison

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Edison

was merely a naughty boy in

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class,

in contrast

, taking a look

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the achievement he made in his life,

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science

really

broaden

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his horizon. In conclusion, both

of

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science

and business have a strong, positive and practical influence

in

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contemporary

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community. In my opinion, if the youth generation can learn

these information

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from school, it will have a huge and positive impact

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their future and our society.