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The graph below shows electricty production (in terrawatt hours) in France between 1982 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The graph below shows electricty production (in terrawatt hours) in France between 1982 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The given line chart demonstrates the amount of
electricity
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 that was produced from 1980 to 2012 in terawatts per hour in France. As an overview, Nuclear as an
electricity
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 producer plays a much more significant role in
electricity
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production
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 than other
resources
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. To be more precise,
this
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electricity
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 resource has the highest amount of
production
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 among other mentioned
resources
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 in the given timespan.
In contrast
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, using renewable
resources
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 for
this
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 product has the least popularity in
this
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 country than other
resources
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. As it can be seen, at the beginning of the
time
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 period, Thermal as a producer, produced more than other
production
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 sources with 120
TWh
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 (terawatts per hour). The figures for both Hydroelectric and Nuclear show the equivalent of
production
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 with roughly 75 TW-h in
this
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time
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.
Also
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, renewables as another mentioned resource, had negligible
production
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 at that
time
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 which can be considered as 0%.
On the other hand
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, Nuclear power became the main source of
electricity
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production
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 producing around 450
TWh
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 in 2006. There were some noticeable differences between
this
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 resource and other
resources
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. To be more specific, thermal which was second second-highest
electricity
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 producer at that
time
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 made approximately 350
TWh
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 less than Nuclear.
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, there was a striking rivalry between the Thermal and Hydroelectric
resources
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 with insignificant differences which Thermal overtook the Hydroelectric at that
time
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.
Conversely
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, the
production
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 of renewables remained the least among other
resources
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 with close to 10
TWh
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, production, resources, time, twh with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
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