some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In our life, there is
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that favours us and some don’t, depending upon our performance. In
this
regard people have different opinions, some say it is best to accept bad situations and some say it is always good to move on with the situation and make necessary
changes
to overcome those, that doesn’t make you a good income or a satisfactory life. In my opinion, I feel the same where we can make
changes
to things that really need
changes
for betterment. To consider my opinion, it is natural that in our lifetime we face lots of challenges that help us grow better every day. The nature of our mind is quite complicated when we fail to make proper use of it. That’s why we have to be conscious of whatever we do daily.
For instance
, if I fail to perform a job that I got recently, probably I will be paid less which will not be enough to cover my daily expenses. If so we have to find out why it is not working and find your ability to do some other job, It will be there if you are willing to do it and keep surviving in
this
contemporary world. Not just changing work but
one
also
needs to improve
one
's attitude to retain his ability to perform better, like working harder and smarter. In the meantime, some people argue that
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it is better to accept the failure and continue with that as it is your destination or fate, citing an example of a failure trying to improve and receiving the worst result after his trial.
That is
why we see people on the streets with their full ability to perform but left on the streets just bagging. For those, they have to improve their mental attitude in making
changes
and becoming better
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. In a nutshell, I would say that we can make
changes
from our worst scenario to a fruitful
one
with positivity and optimism.
Therefore
there are always possible ways to overcome bad luck provided
one
is willing to change.
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  • persevere
  • settle
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